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I dont know Why (PLEASE COMMENT)
written by just-cant-be-me10:18 PM 4/17/05I dont know why I did it
I guess i couldn't take it any more
I thought I was all alone in the room
I never heard you open the door
I had already made the cut
That decide to drain the life from me
I did it in an isolated room
For I did not want you to see
I did not cry when I slit my wrists
My blood I willingly gave
For I knew that each and every slice
Would bring me closer to my grave
Then I heard, a loud strangled moan
I looked and saw you standing there,
And I could not tear my eyes away
In the moment I saw you watching me
I realized too late, I had a reason to live
Weakly holding out my bleeding arms
You rushed with the only care that you could give
Not once did your arms loosen around me
Your tears felt like rain drops on my head
You cried and said "I'd be loved forever"
You held me until you knew i was dead
I am sorry that I left you like that
And you had to watch me die
But thank you for staying with me
And letting your image be the last thing that reached my eye |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dylikchick43 (4-17-2005 - 10:26 PM)
| i think im gonna cry..i dunno y.....it is really deep it has a lot of emotion in it good job |
by Duke~n~MyGurl13 (4-17-2005 - 10:34 PM)
| Wow thats a great poem I loved it keep up the good work... |
by Blood_enigma (4-17-2005 - 10:36 PM)
| Your good. The emotion is almost overwhelming in its amazing-ness. The person is lucky they had someone to love them.... even if it was too late. |
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