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The Mask *please comment*
written by cuttie
11:41 PM 4/17/05
i ware a mask
no one knows the real me
i ware it so i can hide the pain
and make everyone believe
that nothilg is wrong
i ware the mask
so u will not know
how much i miss you
how much this is killing me
not being with you
i hide under the mask
so i don't even see
the things i am feeling
i dont' watn to feel the either
or even let myself see
how much pain
this is causing me
i still luve u
but when i put on the mask
i forget that i do
so u will not see
how much pain you have put me through
i ware a mask
no one Knows the real me


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» Comments / Feedback
by wingless_angel (4-17-2005 - 11:49 PM)
wow, that sounds like me

by Spiffay (4-17-2005 - 11:50 PM)
It's good it doesn't rhyme that well but has a great point.

by emo_clown13 (4-18-2005 - 02:37 AM)
do u know the real u?

by (guest) (4-22-2005 - 09:20 PM)
Maybe you should take off the mask...for a while, and let him see

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