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» Poem: giving up, this time for me
giving up, this time for me
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
01:36 AM 4/18/05
this time i'm giving up for me
on being what you want me to be
to many lost hopes
to many forgotten dreams
beside myself so i can breathe
for once i feel like what i need is me
without you, im all i need to be
my old self is ripping at the seems
the blood is dripping as it gleams
shedding you so i can feed
my self you parasitic fiend
i'm my own army, i can lead
walking out on my past at the sound of a beat
for once i'm following my own feet
giving up this time for me
giving up on what you want me to be


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by OxBlack_BeautyxO (4-18-2005 - 01:58 AM)
This is an awesome poem. I can relate to it. I gave up a long time ago trying to please one person.

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