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formality
written by vampire_princess04:27 AM 8/8/04I hide in the corner,
wondering what to do next,
should I confess that what I said was wrong?,
or should I just forget about it and move on?,
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i know it sucks.....
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| » Comments / Feedback | by SuperBob (8-8-2004 - 04:36 AM)
| :O doesnt suck!....its quite good...me likes it greatly!!!! you hve done well dearie...keep it up!! |
by Genocide Reaper (8-8-2004 - 05:00 AM)
| It makes me think.. I felt the words. So it was definitly, not absurd...Truely, thou art a great poet. |
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