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written by --comfortably_numb--
05:11 AM 4/18/05
Ive been the needle and the thread
Weaving figure 8's and circles 'round your head
I try to laugh but cry instead
Patiently waiting to hear the words you've never said


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umm... short but effective, try to figure out what the last line means..

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by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-18-2005 - 05:55 AM)
Short but sweet I love it. Nice flow-Cassy

by AthiestAnarchist (4-18-2005 - 08:36 AM)
I liked it.

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