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» Poem: Tha Other Night.....[plz comment]
Tha Other Night.....[plz comment]
written by BloodyBallzRebal
11:32 AM 4/18/05
Tha other night i woke up beside you,
all I could think about was I been missin you & you will alwaz be my boo.

I ran my slinder fingers through your hair,
just like you had always done with me,you treated me with care.

You opened your beautiful green eyes,
that I know have helt lots & lots of cries.


You scootted closer to me & I climbed ontop of you.
Then we just started to "mingel"a LIL, I mean come on there want tnothing I could do.

I love the way you kissed me on my neck,
It was all good "at tha end" cuz me & you were both a wreak.

Tha other night was ALSOME, I hope we do it again,
cuz maybe this time we will be alone in our own house with enough time left to spare,
We can do ANYTHANG,really i dont care.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
okay this is kind of not my best but ya i seen my baby diz wkend. XD

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» Comments / Feedback
by forbiddenangelofdarkness (4-18-2005 - 12:03 PM)
awww at least you have a baby

by (guest) (4-18-2005 - 02:59 PM)
This is good but wow that's naughty ! Well ne 1 im me at sk8ergal1002 or OxsarahxO1 DUDE ! ! !

by Miserable_Death_By_Love (4-18-2005 - 05:56 PM)
Ummm If you loved him/her this wouldnt evolve around the sex its not all about that its about love compassion trust not lust sex and being used damn git it straight

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