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» Poem: Wound (NEEDS COMMENTS!)
Wound (NEEDS COMMENTS!)
written by Tonagamu55
02:41 PM 4/18/05
Don't try to break me,
I'm already broken,
I'm shattered accross a field of pain,
No one understands or sees,
These pieces I leave.

(Chorus:)
Life tortures me everday,
Making the wound in my chest deeper,
As I bleed I make more mistakes,
As I heal more wounds appear,
I have been blinded by darkness,
I have been deafened by silence,
These scars will remind me,
Each and everyday of my mistakes.

Don't try to freeze me,
I'm already frozen,
I'm completly stuck in time,
I watch everything happen around me,
I feel like I can do nothing to help.

(Chorus)

Don't try to kill me,
I'm already dead,
I lie lifeless without a soul to help me,
My cold fingers numb the pain,
As I wish for life to return again.

(Chorus)

Don't try to burry me,
I'm already in the ground,
Gone and forgotten about forever,
I remain here in a phase of constant sleep,
I will never rest in peace.

(Chorus)


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by perfect.flaws (4-18-2005 - 02:47 PM)
That was amazing. Deep, and emotional... I loved it.. you should definalty keep writing.

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