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What You Wanted
written by Tonagamu55
02:46 PM 4/18/05
With all the stardom and all the fame,
It's always just such a shame,
When everybody knows your name,
Everyday it's all the same.

(Chorus:)
People never leaving you alone,
Thousands of calls coming to your phone,
You said this is what you wanted,
But now your life has been haunted,
Riding in those limozines,
Your face on all the magazines,
With your name written in gold,
All of thes millions of albums sold.

With all these cheers and roars,
It's not the way life was before,
With all your pictures half-tore,
Coming deep within your core.

(Chorus)

You think you've got the trick,
But you've been hit on the head with a brick,
For you right now life's a snap,
But it's all part of the devils trap.


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» Comments / Feedback
by perfect.flaws (4-18-2005 - 02:49 PM)
Again I am impressed... for me the last line made the whole poem. I like your stuff.

by (guest) (4-18-2005 - 02:55 PM)
I like your stuff it is more than good i think that you should try and make sumthing of this. If that was how you were feeling ,thast how i feel, too. Don't worry your not the only 1. Im me at sk8ergal1002@aim or OxsarahxO1@aim.com

by demented_vampire (4-18-2005 - 02:58 PM)
awesome. i love it!!

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