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» Poem: Goodbye Light
Goodbye Light
written by cryptic_misery
07:05 AM 8/8/04
I follow my dreams as they lead me to black
I step through the portal with no turning back
Revenge is chilling my spine
I'm about to leave everything behind
I can't control my inner self
I'm drowning in blood and hurting my health
Cut cut cut so deep
I hope that my tears are what you will keep
Losing all I got to lose
Feeling things I do not choose
When will I smile
Well not for a while
Hello night
Goodbye Light


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Sigh...so my life is great n all right now except this little part of my heart that has past memories stuck in with the brew..

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» Comments / Feedback
by loveangl04 (8-8-2004 - 10:43 PM)
Interesting...

by Livy Shurtleff (8-25-2004 - 03:02 PM)
WOW. I like this poem. So few words, and I was still overwellmed. No lies. This poem really spoke to me.

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