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My World
written by xBloodyTearsx11:09 PM 4/18/05I have my own little world too
It's lonely
It's dark
And it doesn’t include you
And I’m the riot that your mother would dread
That’s why you hate me
But I still can’t understand
And that’s why I sit and cry bloody tears in my bed
I don't eat, don’t sleep, and don’t even think
Just sit and listen to the music
That no one cares about
Like Sister Hazel Minor Threat and GC
They don’t give it a chance
It should “automatically stink”
Nothing here, nothing but space
Come with me to my world
No matter how hard I try I can’t do it alone
Believe me I try everyday
But still I can’t seem to make this a happier place
These thoughts are so close to flying away
Matters of the past are like a dream
They fade away
As time goes on
No they’re not here to stay
These thoughts that are so close to being dead
And then I’ll really be alone
‘Cause “I’m a freak, I don’t deserve any friends”
I did it to my self
Well; at least that’s what you said
And I don't even mind
Laugh it up
It’s not a big deal anymore
You’ll see soon you won’t be so blind
But look! You’re crying all alone
Like you’ve lost a friend
No one understands
Just like a dog without a bone
These thoughts, they make me feel hurled
Now your life is crashing down
Trying to belong
In this sick and twisted world.
Now I get to laugh
And say through a smile
'Cause I'm not all alone
And this is not a happy place
Do you understand my reasoning?
I'll say it so you can hear me clearly
If you can through the screams and tears
“…
Welcome to my world” |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
it started out as a song w/ a chourou (not included) but i think its better as a poem
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xBloodyTearsx (4-19-2005 - 12:41 AM)
by XxXxAngel_of_deathXxXxX (4-20-2005 - 02:23 AM)
| yeah it is better as a poem. but um..you got potential, not that im the best writer but you know what I mean. i dont hate it but its alrite
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