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CUT
written by bloody_tears_girl04:21 AM 4/19/05this is what i need to do,
it helps me break free, break through.
i have reasons i cut my wrist,
but i won't give you the whole damn list.
this is how i open up,
telling my feelings through this one single cut.
silent words scream out of me,
even though this isn't how it should be.
razors, glass, pins, and knives,
are just a few of what i use to survive.
and even though these scars will stay,
i'll do it anyway. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-19-2005 - 04:36 AM)
| yo, ur words are very meaninful, and i give u alot of respect to know u share ur feelings with a varitey of ppl even when they dont know you, that takes alot, i know i wouldnt be able to do that, and i think alot of us who do cut understand everything u said in such a powerful way.........thank you, for lettin me know im not the only one |
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-19-2005 - 04:39 AM)
| That was poweful and so true. You did a beautiful job of expressing how cutters feel. Saying how it scars but ya just dont care. It was perfect.-Cassy |
by perfect.flaws (4-19-2005 - 07:53 AM)
| I used to cut...and now I have over 20 scars on my one arm alone...I can't go swimming, I can't be cool in the summer...It sucks...because the way you feel now..is exaclty how i felt..you just dont care about the mark thats left behind... but in the future you will... i know you probably won't listen to this, but if there's that slight chance you do then.. trust me you need to stop nowbefore you really regret it...And I never thought that I'd be the person to say this. Anyways it was pretty well thought through poem. |
by (guest) (4-19-2005 - 12:21 PM)
| that was a brilliant powerful poem..thanku i can totally relate, especially with knowing u r givin urself scars but still needing to cut...i hav hundreds on my arms..:( |
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