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» Poem: Your Approval
Your Approval
written by intearsforever
04:25 AM 4/19/05
Nothing I did,
Was good enough for you.
I did everything I could,
Yet to you,
Nothing I did seemed ot be good.

I worked so hard,
And now I am left forever scarred.
Everything I did,
Was for you,
Only for you to take advantage,
Just for me to be left missunderstood.

You never cared,
You just left me here unprepared.
I never knew what you would say next,
But I always knew,
That to you I was just another one of the rejects.

I just wanted your approval,
I just wanted your love,
I wanted to be your daughter from above.

All you gave me was criticism,
Words which I couldn't believe you said,
Those words are what made me look ahead.

You were never good for me,
And this I finally see.

I don't need your approval,
I need your removal.
Please just leave me here,
And finally my happiness may just be near.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Umm...yeah..kinda sucks..oh well

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