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Cookie Cutter Hands....[plz comment]
written by BloodyBallzRebal11:17 AM 4/19/05As I see the little gurl run around with Cookie doe pans,
I see a little gurl with scared up Cookie cutter Hands.
She cant face life or even death,
all she can face is everythang that is coming next.
I wonder if that little gurl could see her razor life ahead
or maybe even if she through it away,what a wonderful life it would had lead.
Could she not have seen the fate she was sinking in?
Could she not seen the pain she had put herself through?
Did know one try to help her,or would they of even new?
She unleashed herself on sharp glass & cans
all this just for Cookie Cutter Hands.
The little gurl carved stars, hearts , & tears of rain,
all this blood streaming down her arms,just a little bit more to feel the pain.
This little gurl finally grew up with a gealty,gealty soul
that one day she got caught and was sent out breathlessly in the cold.
She struggled on for the rest of her life in crazy homes,old garages & beat up vans,
all this hard life from Cookie Cutter Hands. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
okay i wrote this last night.....hope yall like it.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (4-19-2005 - 12:17 PM)
| nice poem but please learn 2 spell i mean i hav no qualms with computer slang but ur jus using completely different words and it just looks odd |
by (guest) (4-19-2005 - 01:23 PM)
| that poem was amazing....I loved it so much...it was so sad but so good. |
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