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Her *comments*
written by --comfortably_numb--02:43 PM 4/19/05feeling her heart as its breaking in half
She walks home crying, she's all by herself
And nobody realizes that she needs help
She bottles it up and the pain is so tough
And sometimes crying just isnt enough..
As she lays on her bed all alone
She's startled by the ringing of her phone
She picks it up but only to hear
Those hurtful comments put into her ear
She hangs up the phone and runs to the bathroom
She opens the cabinet to face her doom
She looks in the cup and pulls out the sharp blade
Even though the old marks were starting to fade
She's crying and thinking "is this really the way?
To end all the crying and take the pain away?"
As thoughts flow around the pain gets to her head
And she says to herself "I would rather be dead"
She takes a good look as she presses it deep
She hit the right vein and her blood starts to seep
Her hand soon lets go and the blade hits the floor
She won't be teased or bullied anymore |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by lilfukedupdragonlover (4-19-2005 - 02:49 PM)
| i like the poem, you should write more poems like this. ones that tell stories. |
by Dolphin14 (4-19-2005 - 03:21 PM)
| Ur poem was one of the beatifullest poems i have ever read. I don't even read poetry and that was one of the best ones I have read. |
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