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better *comments*
written by --comfortably_numb--
02:55 PM 4/19/05
Im screaming inside
Can you hear it?
Im burning inside
Can you feel it?
Is it reali a phase?
Mayb..
Wil I reali get over this?
I hope so..
Coz im so tired of pretending
Tired of living a lie
No one can help me
Coz no one understands
I?d cut myself and watch me bleed
Finally let me rest in peace
With no pain
Jus to die
Die with my dreams
The dreams that never happened
To die with my hopes
The hopes that WiL never happen
Im givin up
Im givin up on my life
Im giving up my faith
My faith is you
I don?t believe
I don?t want to believe
I don?t want to b alone
I don?t want to b rejected
REJECTION
FAILURE
PRESSURE
LIES
TEARS
PAIN
Are you happy now?
When you look at what you?v done
Are you happy now?
You got what u wanted
wel thanks.
coz now i noe better.


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by intearsforever (4-21-2005 - 05:48 AM)
Ahh, hun, it's beautiful. :D

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