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Scars For My Daddy
written by Gothic_Pirate08:56 PM 4/19/05I've asked you why I am invisible to you
But I'm just a glass that you can see through
You dont understand me
So why cant I see?
Little voices in my brain
Take the blade, make your blood rain
Falling into darkness
You think my life is a mess
You put me down, drag my under
Your words are as loud as thunder
So I turn to the only thing I trust
Making my blood flow is a must
Cant you see what you are doing to me?
Just leave and let me be
I can't stand the pain anymore
It hurts down to my core
Dear Daddy, if only you knew
These scars are for you |
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» Comments / Feedback | by cutter91 (4-19-2005 - 10:24 PM)
WOW O_O lol i liked it your really good keep it up! ~~~Kae~~~ |
by intearsforever (4-19-2005 - 10:24 PM)
I love this, and I read some of your other poems, they are very good. You have talent. I enjoyed reading them. Take care...be safe,
xxx ~jessi |
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