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--CAUTION--
written by Stoned_Spyder_0-Thousand09:52 AM 8/8/04You have to face the ultimate difficult challenge.
This is really not for the faint hearted and
Is very dangerous to try to perform.
Do you dare to take the big task?
I warn you with great caution.
Then here is the huge task.
Ban Love, and Happiness.
Will you take the task.
It is your choice.
Your Decision.
Yes or No.
Decide.
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is the task that satan tries to give you and possess you to do.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Cherish (8-8-2004 - 02:09 PM)
| Wow, great poem!! And I like the figure very much!! |
by Psychaotic_333 (4-1-2005 - 06:41 PM)
| I must say a scattered look around this board shows me I'm way over the general age range, and I'm not that impressed by the straight-edge quotient that seems to exist here. You were the diamond in the rough, with this poem here. Or should I say diamante in the rough? You also pay attention to format, while everyone else doesn't. And I like YOUR username. Much better than "death_to_druggies" who got a large slice of my mind fed to him/her a few moments ago.
This poem reminds me of The Matrix for some reason... |
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