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» Poem: its long just plz comment
its long just plz comment
written by just-cant-be-me
09:30 PM 4/19/05
Why did you have to leave this way?
You're still around and we try talk
But we have nothing to say
If people talk to me they say its not "cool"
Is that why you're not around anymore?
Because you're afraid to look like a fool?!?
Well I am sorry that I am still ME!
And I'm not putting on a little act
Of what they want me to be
You HAVE changed And I am noticing it
So I am telling you this
And I'm using all my witt
It is gonna be hard to say
But I must tell you that it
Is going down this way
This is over and that is that
So lets end it right now
lets make this pact!
There I said it! It's done! its done!
But now you're crying,
What have I done?
You changed, and I thought you wouldnt care
If I would have known it would hurt you
I wouldnt've said it I wouldnt dare
What did I do?
I dont know what else to say,
So all i can do is sit here and look at you
I just can't talke the pain no more
So I go, I run
Over to my bedroom door
There deeply locked away inside
Is where all my knives and blades
do hide
Right now they are the only ones with me in the room
I'm alone, I'm insane!
I shall be sentenced to my tomb.
I didn't know you followed me,
until you opened the door
Then I realized I wasn't always like this,
Well I wasn't before
But YOU'RE the one who has changed not ME
So why won't you get out here
And just let me be?
Well, I made the cuts and I am better now
But here you are and you are giving me this, look like you're wondering how
But I dont know! I dont know!
But I am really glad,
because now I will go,
even if it makes others mad...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is how i feel so i wrote i know i can take some stuff out but i like it this way so please comment

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by Killmequick (4-19-2005 - 10:26 PM)
Cool man, just let it all out, when the inspiration strikes! ^^ x

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