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» Poem: a sorrow unrequitted
a sorrow unrequitted
written by xBloodyTearsx
12:35 AM 4/20/05
I think of all my problems
I think of all my pain
I think of all my sorrows
Until I go insane

I think of all the smiles I’ve worn
Which hide sorrows underneath
No one seems to notice
That I go through so much grief

My tears seem to keep going
Inside these tired eyes
Each time I want to tell you
My words come out as lies

These days I’m feeling distant
Far away and weak
My sadness pulls me further
From the happiness I seek

I’ve just begun to realise
That my hope and dreams are gone
I’m walking down a dead-end road
Humming a tuneless song

I’m standing on a rooftop
Although I’m scared of heights
I’m watching the cars beneath me move
And somehow this doesn’t feel right

Now I think of what I am doing
I know I should find a way
To beat through my depression
Will I be able to someday?

Someone might be there
To help me make it through
Maybe they will listen
And tell me what to do


I’m seeing trough the darkness
And I’m starting to trust a few
I think I’ll try to make it
So I can be there for them, too

But now you've left me here
hollow and alone
knife to my wrist, shaking with fear
tears fall from these eyes, but heart is still stone

i could cut untill the end
but then you wouldnt know
that these kind of scars never mend
and if they do, its just to slow

you wouldnt know how you hurt me and left me here to die
you just walked away
not a curse, not a sigh
i didnt see it coming, i dont know wat to say
goodbye, my forgotten lover, goodbye


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I WONT LET YOU GET THE BEST OF ME I WONT GIVE YOU THE SATISFACTION OF KNOWING U KILLED ME! I WONT LET YOU KNOW MY PAIN!! I COULD REVEAL MY INNER HATE, BUT WAT FUN WOULD THAT BE??

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» Comments / Feedback
by XxXxAngel_of_deathXxXxX (4-20-2005 - 02:42 AM)
ok yeah what ever fuck what i said last time..you dont have potential, you're really good. great imagery.

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