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a girl on the floor cring comments
written by porkchop_chick
06:10 PM 4/20/05
She lays on the floor,
watching,
watching the clouds moving on,
hoping that was her,
tears flow down her cheeks,
with only him on her mind,
he hurt her so bad,
and he doesn't even know it,
but whos to blame for that,
no one,
because no one knows but her,
her dark secret,
her only weakness,
on she lays on the concret floor,
she remembers,
she remembers every memory they had,
with every blink of her eyes,
a tear falls,
a tear symbolizing every memory they had,
and only one question on her mind,
will she get over him,
she doubts it,
but only time could tell,
for the girl who lays on the floor,
crying.


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hope u all like it comments please!

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» Comments / Feedback
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (4-20-2005 - 06:11 PM)
I dont know what it was...but I liked something about it. Nice job-Cassy

by porkchop_chick (4-20-2005 - 06:15 PM)
Thank u, for your comment I do appreciate it.

by cryinginside (4-20-2005 - 07:58 PM)
i loved the poem it was very..... i dont know what the word i'm looking for is but eaither way awesome poem

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