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» Poem: Reflection
Reflection
written by bloodangel1377
06:51 PM 4/20/05
i finally look up, seeing the girl
staring back at me with a pained
expression on her face.

She blinks and shakes her head
then sighs and fakes a smile

her mouth opens but no words
come out.

She glances down at my scars
and winces

she looks deep into my eyes
and i see the tears start to
gather in hers

She gently whisper " how could it
get to this? this far?

i reach out to touch her only to feel
a solid and cold item come between us.
i try again only to fail.

So there i sit on the floor, stroking the
glass. the mirror image somehow soothing
my own pain


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is truly the best poem i have ever wrote, so much emotion in it. I have actually done this before. I feel ashamed to feel this way so much, but i guess depression must live somewhere, am i right?

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» Comments / Feedback
by .scars. (4-20-2005 - 07:20 PM)
this is awesome..i really liked it. a ton of emotion.

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