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The Arrow
written by runes8mysoul07:49 PM 4/20/05The golden arrow lies
Flesh, feathers, black blood soaks through
Even the brave fall |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Meaningless_Soul (4-20-2005 - 08:07 PM)
| It's good, but if it's a haiku, then the first line needs to have 5 syllables. . . in this one it has 6. i counted. . . but all in all, it's good. Keep up the good work |
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