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» Poem: the lies u said & my blood u shed
the lies u said & my blood u shed
written by mcr-goth2
08:41 PM 4/20/05
read between the blackened lines, blood was shed & i will die
dont give up and dont even try
with the lies u said and the blackened lives u kept
when u go into the blackned sky
you'll see me there when i start to cry
when u find out i died because of all ur lies
i think you'll start to fly
(chours)
when the angels cry out to u
but u wont except with all that u've been through
but i wont give up and all sing to u
as i take u through my world, with these blackened skys and all these lies as these people die and u start to fly into oblivion (chours stops at
oblivian)

as my messed up brain is drivin me insane
into this empty world without a name
i fly into the sky, without a care in the world
people call u names and drives u insane
but u think back to me and how we could be


(CHOURS SING TWICE)


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
its about a guy who killed his girlfriend and wont admit it and he dies 2 and lies and lies and wont listen to the girlfriend i think its good

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» Comments / Feedback
by ItalianStallionGrl (4-20-2005 - 08:48 PM)
that was great. it wuz deep and it had a sad but good story behind it.

by bitter_beauty_of_death (4-21-2005 - 07:42 PM)
its dark and twisted and i love it

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