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» Poem: Why?
Why?
written by lady_tsukiyo
09:59 PM 4/20/05
Why do I always fall for you? All you have to do is say those three words and I forget all that you had done to me. All those lies seem to dissapear and it is like you never said them. I promise on my life that this time I won't forget them. I won't let you rip my heart out. It won't happen. Please don't lie. It hurts so much watching you ask me to trust you. I really want to but my mind is saying don't while my heart is saying please do. So tell me, why do I always fall for you?


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yeah im sorry. it sucks.. doesn't have a form or anything.. just free verse or whatever.. im not very good at this.. so i guess please leave me some feedback or something and tell me what you think..

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» Comments / Feedback
by LetyouDown90 (4-20-2005 - 10:06 PM)
I know how that feels. I feel it all the time and it sucks.

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