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from lover to friend
written by prizzle1612:01 AM 4/21/05you said to me you wanted to end ,
what we have,
but start a new begining as a friend.
i asked why,
you had to hurt me like this,
you said that we lost what we had,
but i know in your heart u long for a kiss
i got over it and ignored u,
but u came back to me and say i made a mistake,
but i know i dont want to go through,
this again,
but in my heart i need you i long for u. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by PalirBeauJeanne (4-21-2005 - 12:26 AM)
| I don't like it. Not really. You could be more specific and the use of commas is a bit "over the top". |
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