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» Poem: wheres life? plz comment
wheres life? plz comment
written by m.nizzle
07:57 PM 4/21/05
i wake up everyday not knowing who or whats going to cross my path today. but i do it. i do it because i have to. life is expected of me. it doesnt fill me, it doesnt satisfy me, its just the cause of my tears, my loneliness, my sorrow. normal? ahhhh....normal....a word that im surprised i even know how to spell it. im so confused. im told life goes on, but what do u do when yeah i wake up everyday i breath air everyday, but thats the only thing that comes my way. nothing is happening to me. i feel nothing. why?what repels life from me? why do i always drop it and trip over it and stomp on it and just fuck myself over from it. why? what is life? this cant be it. i get a do over right? wrong. this sux


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by lifesux802 (4-22-2005 - 04:27 PM)
that was a really good poem. its kind of like my life.

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