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» Poem: suicide
suicide
written by butcakes
04:17 AM 4/22/05
leaving this, leaving that,
leaving everything with no return
you think you have no destination
listen up - theres something to learn

the pain you are taking away is equal
to the pain dispersed to those you love
unfair, selfish, weak and cowardly
lift your head - look to the above

you call me "preachy" and im sorry
sorry i care enough to let you know
the day you die is the day you're judged
call me preachy then and enjoy the show!

is life too much; or are you too little?
heed my warning: its all in your mind
you tell me i wouldn't know how hard it is
you're right; because of this light i now find

you see life as a thorn in your side
but you missed the rose, son
suicide isnt worth the pain
when all is said and done!

is suicide the Escape of pain... or the Gate?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
just some advice for those who are thinking of committing suicide...
its not worth it! trust me!

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