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» Poem: I don't care *please comment*
I don't care *please comment*
written by cuttie
05:14 AM 4/22/05
what would you do
if i said to you
i don't care anymore
we have been apart
for about a week
and i guess i just really don't care
i don't need u anymore
yeah i guess i still love you
but as far as us getting back together
i really don't care anymore
you've hurt me one to manytimes
an u never know when someone else might come along.
so i guess what im trying to say
is i just don't care anymore


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please comment
oh and i don't really feel that way

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by (guest) (4-22-2005 - 09:02 PM)
Good choice, once you find that you aren't dependant on them anymore and they are not the greatest thing that ever happened to you you gain freadom. The freadon to look at things rationally and make choices with your mind rather than your heart. Don't get me wrong, the heart serves its place and you wouldn't marry someone if you don't love them, but you would also not marry someone just because you love them either. The mind and the heart have different jobs, if you let each do it own then it will lead you to happiness.

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