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loss *please comment*
written by cuttie
05:19 AM 4/22/05
have u ever lost some one dear to ur heart?
and didn't know whare to turn?
Do you hope that they are in a better place?
when i lost my aunt
i didn't know what to do
all i could do was cry
it seemed as if a part of me went with her when she died
now i am older
and she has been gone for quite sometime
but her memory lives on
deep in side
i know now that tears won't bring her back
but it is still a los
to lose some one at a young age, or any age at that matter is very hard
and its like i appricate her now
more than i ever did
so i just wanted to say i love you
and wish u could be here
but i kow ur in a better place


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by (guest) (4-22-2005 - 08:57 PM)
It is painful to lose anyone you hold dear but we hope they are in a better place and pray for them. Remember that they are not really gone, you can always talk to them even if they don't answer and they will never get tired of listening to you ;-)

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