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Suicidal mind(anorexic)-please comment
written by butter-fly07:34 AM 4/22/05i cant eat
i cant sleep
i need to escape the world of food
a place where calories add up to nul. (0)
I sit in the lunch hall
the noise is silence in my mind
I have to escape the evil stares
the ones that watch me closely,
No one to talk to
no where to hide
I have to behave like its all alright
In the nurses room
im down to 25
still to fat
they say i've lost wieght
they say im too skinny to see
they laugh
all peering at the scale
now down to 23
Im going crazy
becoming obsessed
they all watch my boney frame move around
my skinny legs run as fast until i drop
until i fall
my bony fingers holding this pencil to write as fast as i can...my dying words
im the girl who had a scare
something wrong with her brain
i was becoming insane
the pain that grew
the weight that was lost
stopped as i lay in hospital
the wires connected to me
my pulse beating at 93
they made a charity to save a teenage girl
they called her mental
why cant they see
i was just waiting to see the world end right in front of me
to close my eyes fall into sleep
i didnt want to be saved
i wanted to die
the anorexic teen
a suicidal mind |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ok it probably sux ass but i got really into it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by butcakes (4-22-2005 - 07:41 AM)
| that was a pretty cool poem!! it allows you to understand the mind of an anorexic... i wanna study people who think like that /who have eating disorders... good stuff! |
by iluvcecily (4-22-2005 - 12:37 PM)
| that was a rilly good poem. do u kno sum1 who is lyk that? |
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