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I thought you loved me (please comment)
written by picklenerd09:30 AM 4/22/05As we lay in this room of empty souls i lie awake and i ponder with the voices in my head.......
...does my love even matter to you anymore,
now that we are alone dieing on the floor...
...why can't you look at me when i tell you i love you,
you sigh in displeif what you think i would lie to you...
...you quickly get dressed,
what is the hous on fire or am i just to obsessed...
...tell me what is wrong with me,
why do you hate me...
...or do you just love and are to scared to tell me.
wait why are you leaving, where are you going, please come back.
but I... I thought you loved me |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this might not make sense but you got to relize what love is to understand this
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| » Comments / Feedback | by butter-fly (4-22-2005 - 11:06 AM)
| I think its pretty good..well done :) |
by butter-fly (4-22-2005 - 11:07 AM)
| I think its pretty good..well done :) |
by gurlnextdoor (4-22-2005 - 11:56 AM)
| This is good :) good job keep writing |
by (guest) (4-22-2005 - 12:37 PM)
| I liked it...I'm sorry that that happened.... |
by ForsakenDream (4-22-2005 - 01:09 PM)
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