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Why-please comments(not insults)
written by butter-fly11:00 AM 4/22/05They giggle as always
their wicked eyes looking me up and down
why am i like this
what can it be
i turn to food to comfort me
Why do they ignore me
why do they tease
I just wanted to be friendly
but it came back and hit me
I have no friends
im the fat kid thats not cool
sitting alone
no one to talk to
totally blocked off from the world
into my very own zone:
Where thin and fat
are both alike
where peoples minds are not so black and white
so that someday i may be
the hottest thing on some magazine |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Instead of just focusing on anorexic peoples thoughts i thought i'd go into a mind of an overweight teen
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| » Comments / Feedback | by stephenking_apprentice (4-22-2005 - 11:07 AM)
| I compleatly understand what your writing, I to am a fat kid......... :( |
by iluvcecily (4-22-2005 - 12:38 PM)
| that was good as i am also a fat teen. |
by (guest) (4-22-2005 - 12:54 PM)
| i know wat ur talking about.... i use to be teased all the time but then i got like i am right now n i stopped eating so now im kinda thin but im still kinda fat.. but... ::hugs:: :) |
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