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» Poem: am i still shaking?
am i still shaking?
written by think_quest
12:10 PM 4/22/05
quivering girls
quivering girls
teach me to dance the dance
of love itself
of all my dreams
and maybe you will dissapear

quivering girls
quivering girls
i have never seen my heart
so black nor
grey like my mind
so maybe you could help me

quivering girls
quivering girls
show me to dance this dance
of life.


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i don't know......

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» Comments / Feedback
by iluvcecily (4-22-2005 - 12:22 PM)
this was an okay poem i think that u over did the quivering gurls.

by ForsakenDream (4-22-2005 - 12:59 PM)
bleh?

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