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Take It Slow (NEEDS COMMENTS)
written by Tonagamu5506:49 PM 4/22/05Hold it back,
Take it slow,
Don't you dare rush things now.
(Repeat once)
Because dreams can become a reality,
Like hours go by and the day fades,
I can see the fields of blue and grey,
Like the stars in the night shades.
I can feel myself rising,
But I think I will get there,
Without a bruise on my face,
Or a scratch on my knees,
But somehow I know,
I must take it slow. |
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PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS THIS IS ONE OF MY BEST SONGS!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Shhh_Itssecret (4-22-2005 - 07:01 PM)
| I like it, it's pretty good. :) |
by kitkatbabe723 (4-22-2005 - 07:06 PM)
| i think it was okay not the best but it was str8
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by (guest) (4-22-2005 - 07:10 PM)
| boring!!!!!!wut the hell is it talkin bout?¿ |
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