» Poem: thoughts (comments please) |
thoughts (comments please)
written by unsure08:34 PM 4/22/05alone, again, bored to my skull,
my thoughts overwhelm in an ugly swell,
the thoughts distort and turn on me,
that white souled girl i used to be,
but now i think and need to cry,
but i cant even when i start to try,
my emotions have died and I know for sure,
one day i'll hit a blood covered floor
emily g-g |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Shhh_Itssecret (4-22-2005 - 08:52 PM)
I think that's pretty good. :) |
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