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bleeding
written by hotstuff11609:02 PM 4/22/05bleeding slowly out the life,
watching it fade with my pain and strife.
sliding slowly into dark,
watching the light go out like a spark.
crying bloody tears of pain,
until only my lonely body remains.
travelling slowly down to hell,
hearing them ring the judjement bell.
stairring blankly at the endless fire,
looking at the dark pit, ideas inspired.
looking at all the new faces,
hoping for gods amazing graces...
but reallizing that there will be none,
and seeing slowly that my life is done... |
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dont comment on this if ur not mature!!!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Brooklyn0383 (4-22-2005 - 09:13 PM)
| i like that poem its really good. ur a good poet. i cant wait to read ur next 1s. |
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