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» Poem: What I feel
What I feel
written by lifesux802
10:52 PM 4/22/05
When I cut myself, I feel all the pain go away.
I love the feeling.
The sweet red blood running down my arm.
So I cut more and more.
Untill I die.
Then I see what I have done was wrong that night.
You may ask why did I do it.
Well it was all because of my past.
You see I never liked life.
I actually hated it.
I wanted to die.
And it may have been an accident, but I will never forget that night.
And how i cryed.
And the look on your face, made me sad.
Now I see you upon this earth.
And how I wish I could hold you.
And tell you everything will be ok.
But now I am dead.
And that's all I can say.
Thank you for not being there for me on that cold bloodly day!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
It is about someone who is deeply sad. And killled her self one night.

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by (guest) (4-22-2005 - 11:23 PM)
it was really good. that's all i can say.

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