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» Poem: Kissing You Deeply (NEEDS COMMENTS!!)
Kissing You Deeply (NEEDS COMMENTS!!)
written by Tonagamu55
11:57 PM 4/22/05
In looked you in the eyes of deep blue,
And I started kissing you,
You looked at me with at sexy smile,
And you giggled for a little while,
Then you held me and we kissed again,
I don't know how long it had been,
Since I met a girl like this,
Who gave me such a great kiss.

(Chorus:)
I barely even know you,
And somehow I'm giving myself to you,
Kissing you deeply,
Holding you tighly,
Pushing with all my strength,
Do I need you,
Or do I just want you?

You backed away from me with a sexy pose,
Then you started taking off all your clothes,
I did the same with my own,
So many feelings I had never shown,
Then the kisses got deeper,
And I knew you were gonna be a keeper,
Then I nibbled on your nose,
And I guess you know how the rest goes.

(Chorus)

We did it all night long,
By the time I'm done with this song,
You could've only guessed what happened next,
Well it is really complex.

(Chorus)


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Don't hate me for writing this song. I wrote it yesterday. If you don't like it DEAL WITH IT!! PLEASE LEAVE SOME COMMENTS!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by LaLa125678 (4-23-2005 - 12:48 AM)
Its a sweet thing and on most circumstances I would hate you for writing that but I'm over my whole I hate life and myself thing. I think i was really sweet.

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