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written by just-cant-be-me02:14 AM 4/23/05Everyone has their own little views
And when they hear me talk it seems like some big news
They pretend to care
even though its their evil eyes that always stare
They see the cuts and scars
The ones that I make when im crying and starig out at the stars
They dont understand real Pain
Walking down the halls and no body knowing my name
They dont see the friends I've lost
whenever all our old paths cross
I will try to say hi
but u just leave w/o saying bye
I just wish it would end
all the smiles that are really pretend
all the shit they put me through
all the things they say and do
the blade is my only friend
whit it i never have to pretend
because the real pain will never end |
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its just whats on my mind please comment... even if u dont like it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloodydisirez (4-23-2005 - 07:25 AM)
| your one of the best poets on this site(besides me of course) u2u i wanna talk it was fuckin awsome |
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