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Falls and Falls
written by psycoklownluv69
02:35 AM 4/23/05
She sits in a room
And stares at the walls
She just gave up
Her heart just falls and falls

For nobody can save her
Except for her
But it’s a dead end
She’ll just have to suffer

She is missing a part
A part of her heart
He fed off he pain
Like it was a Sweet Tart

She trusted that one
For like no other
She gave all faith to he
She loved him more than a brother

But she loved him more
Than that
She looks at the picture of them
And picks up the bat

She swings at it
It shatters on the floor
She uses the pieces for suicide
As blood splatters on the door


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this was to one of my ex's ... this one of the ones that my friend liked and she wanted me to put on here

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» Comments / Feedback
by scotty (4-23-2005 - 02:46 AM)
its a really good poem

by cuttie (4-23-2005 - 02:50 AM)
its really good

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