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» Poem: Child's Way Out
Child's Way Out
written by apple_10
03:40 AM 4/23/05
Watching all these people in depression
I can't help but question
Why they always take the child's way out
And I doubt
That they even have it that bad
They should be glad
With what they've got
And leave their depression to be forgot
They drink and cut
In attempt to shut
Out their pain
But only make it worse
As they then immerse
Themselves in their own depression
And deep down, this pain, has become an obsession


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
These depressed people need to realize that they have it better than at least half the world, and if they are truely depressed, take it head on, no drinking, drugs, cutting, or any other pussy attempt to get attention and stop their pain.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Ev0l_sin#TRIP (4-23-2005 - 04:42 AM)
actually they're (our) way out of pain is pretty mathimatical, we cancel out pain with pain to keep balance, pain(heart,family,life) x pain(cutting,drinking,drugs) = balance, neg. x neg. =pos.

by (guest) (4-23-2005 - 05:13 AM)
hey i really admired ur poem. I understand what you are trying to say. good job. ~MEEE~

by bloodydisirez (4-23-2005 - 06:56 AM)
i agree if half the people that say the are deppresed realy are, they should suck it up becouse cuttind drugs or drinking is only more pain on top of the other pain, so allof them are stupid... do what i did and write poetryor find away out of the pain without selfabuse!!!

by (guest) (4-23-2005 - 08:02 AM)
Great job on this poem. i agree with everything its saying.

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