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» Poem: How Lori Said Goodbye
How Lori Said Goodbye
written by Lady Deathstrike
04:04 AM 4/23/05
I'm looking out the window
I'm trying something new
I'm forcing myself not to think of you

I'm counting the stars
I'm ignoring your voice
I'm praying that I'm making the right choice

Is this goodbye?
Then why are you crying?
Is this the end?
Then why are you holding my hand?

Leave me here
Laughters all I've got left
Let me stay
You should not have come back

On my own
things look clearer
without you
things are just better

Maybe I was wrong
But now I can't change my mind
Dont turn around, a shell's all you'll find
Dont look back, there's nothing inside


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Lori did acid, and her brain got all messed up. Here's my poem about her.

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