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broken
written by xxx_conversechick13_xxx12:45 PM 4/23/05My mascara is running
My hair, out of place,
I'm sitting here and trying
To forget your face.
I hate this feeling
i have inside
i hate all these nights
i've sat and cried.
i hate it that you thought
that we were both done
because in my mind
you were the one.
so with my broken pride
and all the tears i've cried
i shall leave this place
and soon forget your face |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i didnt write this because someone left me or anything. i just wrote it cuz the feelings were there.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Shhh_Itssecret (4-23-2005 - 01:19 PM)
| Wow. I think it's really good. :) |
by cute-susu (4-23-2005 - 01:23 PM)
| HeeY.....
I like that poem....(O: |
by trulybroken57 (4-23-2005 - 01:27 PM)
| that is really good, i like how it rhymes, but it doesn't seem like you tried too hard to do that. good job |
by (guest) (4-23-2005 - 02:09 PM)
| i like how u rhymed you should make add on to it but overall good poem |
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