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One last time*
written by Trapezium08:35 AM 8/9/04Can i kiss you just one last time?
Can i dream of you and wish you are mine?
Can i hold you close when your world falls down?
Can i be there for you and be around?
Why did they tell me not to love you?
Why did they tell me not to?
Why did you hurt me so bad?
Why did you make my life sad?
I have been here for you all my life,
I have been repayed with a blunt knife,
I have loved you forever,
I have thought you wouldn't leave; never.
I thought i would end up enthused,
I thought i'd never be this confused,
I thought we'd be together for longer,
I thought you'd make me so much stronger.
Can i kiss you just one last time?
Can i dream of you and wish you are mine?
Can i hold you close when your world falls down?
Can i be there for you and be around? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote a much better version of this then deleted it... anyways i wrote it just to show i'm still not over the loss of my ex... i love her to bits but she just slams my face in the dirt...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (8-9-2004 - 08:37 AM)
| Tell me about it. I got a few of them stuck in my head. I want put a bullet in it to flush out the Memories...It really Disgust me...I just handle my problems with Rage. and Hate. Instead of Sorrow. |
by SuperBob (8-9-2004 - 08:37 AM)
| awww..that was beautiful!!! i could feel the emotions so perfectly!!! incredible liek always!!! |
by Morbid Angel (8-27-2004 - 01:32 PM)
| Wow I liked that :) Well done x |
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