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Make it better
written by Trapezium09:49 AM 8/9/04I want to make it better,
But still i bleed,
They tell me to forget her,
But still i bleed.
I will stand by your side,
I'll be there for you,
I'll sit with you through this bumpy ride,
I'll be there for you.
I'll do anything,
Be with you forever,
I'll do everything.
Be with you forever. |
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ok so it's another one for my ex... i just can't seem to let go... sorry for the crap poems... there's just too much flying through my head
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| » Comments / Feedback | by SuperBob (8-9-2004 - 09:57 AM)
| no no mustnt be sorry...it helps to write to get the thoughts in order...tis what i do...and you have yet to write a crappy poem...so...no lies...your poem is nice...its soft and meaningful....i felt the pain in not being able to let go.... |
by Norway_babe (8-9-2004 - 06:10 PM)
| Sandy. I hope Rosie understand how much u love her. If she doesent, she's an idiot... umm. Yeah ur talented!:D |
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