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such is life
written by devil-dick02:59 PM 8/9/04the path through life is broke
i noticed this when i woke.
the treck we have to make is tough
all because the path is rough.
we may succeed in life if we try
but only if true friends help us by.
the people who push you down
just look at them and frown.
you know that you are in pain
but remember what you have to gain.
your life is yours to shape and mould
dont believe everything your told.
you can change what you wish
like a chef editing a home made dish.
in the end we are who we are
remember that and you will go far. |
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one of my poems on life, i have others so check them aswell.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (8-9-2004 - 07:36 PM)
| "in the end we are who we are
remember that and you will go far.".......very true....this one is good as well.. __freakshow
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by Trapezium (8-10-2004 - 01:09 PM)
| this is an excellent poem... have you looked into philosophy perchance... your words are similar to the of a famous philosopher i forget the name of... good poem! |
by (anonymous) (8-10-2004 - 03:25 PM)
| thats really..whats the word..erm...uplifting :) |
by (anonymous) (8-10-2004 - 04:24 PM)
| Great. Another one of my favorites that you've written. |
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