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good and bad?
written by devil-dick12:06 PM 8/10/04heaven seems like the best,
hell seems the worse.
heaven is full of angels,
and hell dont have a verse.
how are we to know which is the best,
and where we want to go.
nobody has returned from death,
so nobody can know.
all we know is what we have been told,
by parents and preachers.
it isnt a decision, its a path you take,
you dont learn the way, life isnt your teacher.
we dont know the secrets life has to hide,
we take what we get, we keep what we can.
we live a life of hope, of calming misery,
we live in a sanctuary, a world of man.
if the almighty God existed, we shouldnt have pain,
we shouldnt see the evil in the dark.
He warned noah and he helped moses,
he moses power, he helped noah and his ark.
we dont here about the Devil, or his life.
we saw the omen, but does he have a wife?
al we get is the bad stuff from the Devil,
the good from the God.
change the names around, the devil would be good,
then jesus would be the evil little sod.
we all have power over our life,
we all can fight for our view.
its the faith people forget about,
its choice whats makes us new. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
we all have a view. we all see fings diferently. what did you thing to this. let me please.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (8-10-2004 - 12:26 PM)
| Wow... what a beautiful poem... i especially like the ending... keep it coming because i really enjoyed this and i see your poin tof view... you are a good poet |
by (anonymous) (8-10-2004 - 01:01 PM)
| *claps* I like it!! very nice ^_^ |
by (anonymous) (8-10-2004 - 03:21 PM)
| that made me feel bad...cause my poems are so lame..i want yours :) |
by (anonymous) (8-10-2004 - 04:08 PM)
| Love it...Especially the ending :). |
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