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Derailed*
written by Trapezium12:49 PM 8/10/04You laugh at me when i fall,
You kick me when i'm down,
You push my head under water,
You try to make me drown.
You tear me when i'm torn,
You drop me when i'm feeling low,
You break me when i'm broken,
You beat me when i'm slow.
I need you when you need someone else,
I scream at you when you shout,
I mend my heart when you break it,
I cry for you when your tears run out. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This must've come from somewhere but i'm not sure where... "my train of though derailed" as SuperBob has said... it's a bad poem
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (8-10-2004 - 01:06 PM)
| actually i liek the one "Derailed". I tink its my favourite of them all |
by XxStolenSmilexX (8-10-2004 - 01:08 PM)
| It's simple but it makes alot of sense, i relate to it so well. |
by (anonymous) (8-10-2004 - 01:08 PM)
| actually i liek the one "Derailed". I tink its my favourite of them all |
by SuperBob (8-10-2004 - 10:15 PM)
| oh trains of thought derailing...sorry didnt knwo that was a contagious part of me....but that poem isnt bad...its hits close to home for me |
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