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title less
written by devil-dick02:16 PM 8/10/04life for me is hard. i fight it everyday.
why is it the people i care, never feel the same way.
all my life i have had shit and pain.
neither having anything to lose, or gain.
so i get close to someone. i tell them how i feel.
they say the same back. lying as they no it isnt real.
we share precious moments. times of joyful fun.
they forget the time they leave, pain has just begun.
they make you happy, they make you sad.
with or without them you dont know if your glad.
life is a complex structure of confusion.
a world of strange diffusion. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
whoop for life, i need a title. im no good at naming the, just writing them
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dark_horse (8-10-2004 - 02:24 PM)
| i take it you dont like your life...that poem reminds me of me...and how i feel..nice 1 |
by (anonymous) (8-10-2004 - 03:12 PM)
| well it was gud bt it made me cry n you know why so i dnt have to explain...... Rheaxx |
by (anonymous) (8-10-2004 - 03:17 PM)
by (anonymous) (8-10-2004 - 04:04 PM)
| It's awesome. One of my favorites.Makes you think. I love it. |
by (anonymous) (8-17-2004 - 12:58 PM)
| great i really like this one
xxx |
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