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love is like a poem
written by devil-dick04:47 PM 8/10/04love is like a poem
it makes you feel good.
when your with the one you love
you can feel it in your blood.
All the joy that it brings
with the happiness you get together
because you and your love
will be with each other forever |
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yet another love based poem. plz coment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (8-17-2004 - 12:56 PM)
by sonleef (9-14-2004 - 02:16 PM)
| very good! i think you need to put something on the end about how as you get to the end of a poem it hurts to be done with it. but whatever, it's your poem. i like it! |
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